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高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:08浏览次数:6604
要求:
文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要,因此提高国民修养势在必行。近日,你班就本话题进行了热烈讨论,请据以下要点给某英文报写一篇120字左右的短文,表明个人观点。
1. 提高国民素质的必要性;  
2. 列举你所观察到的一些不文明行为(两种以上); 
3. 就此做出评论,并提出建议。  
参考词汇:behave  v 举止、行为、表现  spit  vi 吐痰    
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作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇积累较少;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

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The image of a person is a non-word letter of introduction. It is through your language, behavior, appearance, you will be able to determine what kind of people. A great day greetings from the beginning of a sentence. The morning after getting up the first thing is to ask parents of early, this will convey cordial greetings respect your elders, your love, will create a warm atmosphere. Good morning to get up the morning to say that it is not wrong it should be an apology? Yes, people live in this world will inevitably have done something wrong, but it more or less. Wrong, they should know how to apologize. If you do not say "I'm sorry, please forgive!", Then you will not be able to repair the image has been damaged. Sometimes, you might have heard how the two girls happily fashionable to say: "She is the mother!" You might encounter someone hit you like, do not say hello, they left the situation. This is a shameful act how ah! However, still some people in society these impolite not ashamed of the behavior, do not think that strange, and said: "This kind of trivial, not worth mention." You think this is a matter you? I think the most important life courtesy of civilization than the highest wisdom, all knowledge is important. Therefore, we must cultivate the good habit of courtesy and manners. In addition, a very important point: We have China is a country with an ancient civilization, you said, we can no civilization,not it? Otherwise, pick a trend of lost civilizations, like picking a watermelon seed lost the same!

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