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The image of a person is a non-word letter of introduction. It is through your language, behavior, appearance, you will be able to determine what kind of people. A great day greetings from the beginning of a sentence. The morning after getting up the first thing is to ask parents of early, this will convey cordial greetings respect your elders, your love, will create a warm atmosphere. Good morning to get up the morning to say that it is not wrong it should be an apology? Yes, people live in this world will inevitably have done something wrong, but it more or less. Wrong, they should know how to apologize. If you do not say "I'm sorry, please forgive!", Then you will not be able to repair the image has been damaged. Sometimes, you might have heard how the two girls happily fashionable to say: "She is the mother!" You might encounter someone hit you like, do not say hello, they left the situation. This is a shameful act how ah! However, still some people in society these impolite not ashamed of the behavior, do not think that strange, and said: "This kind of trivial, not worth mention." You think this is a matter you? I think the most important life courtesy of civilization than the highest wisdom, all knowledge is important. Therefore, we must cultivate the good habit of courtesy and manners. In addition, a very important point: We have China is a country with an ancient civilization, you said, we can no civilization,not it? Otherwise, pick a trend of lost civilizations, like picking a watermelon seed lost the same!