2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From the form,we can get a conlusion that higher earnings in education pays,the unemployment rates get lower.Everyone knows the education is signifitant.Without education ,Our society would be terrible. As the form says,if one person who get the professional degree,whose median weekly earnings is highnest,however,one less than high school diploma,whose salary is the most unacceptable.As the saying goes:It is how terrible if you ignorce knowledge! In a all.education is very important for the country development and all people.