语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;若注意下文中的句法错误,文章会很不错;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了。
Now the Internet is more and more developed, but the Internet has also There are both advantages and disadvantages. Some people think that the network can learn, work more efficiently and life can give us help But others think the network so that young people indulge in, thus influence learning. And I think the Internet has made great influence on our life, he changed our way of life, but he is also a double-edged sword, we should make good use of it