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Disposable plastic bags have been widely used, although it has brought great convenience to our life, people are accustomed to the life, but it brings the convenience brought lasting harm. It can not only cause white pollution, there are potential hazards, under certain conditions on crops, animal, human beings can cause some damage. Limit of disposable plastic bags can be Protect environment, let the earth more beautiful