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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:04浏览次数:3160
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;句式变化多样;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

Transcript: In his letter to the Russian Patriarch, Mikhail Kalashnikov wrote that "one question was causing pain to his soul": if the rifle he had created had claimed lives, then did that mean that he, "a Christian and an Orthodox believer, was to blame for their deaths?" "The longer I live," he continued, "the more this question drills itself into my brain and the more I wonder why the Lord allowed man to have the devilish desires of envy, greed and aggression". The letter has been published by the newspaper Izvestia. It quotes a spokesman for the Patriarch as saying that when weapons serve to defend the fatherland, the Russian Orthodox Church supports those who created them, as well as the soldiers who use them. It's thought that more than 100 million Kalashnikov rifles have been sold worldwide. Mikhail Kalashnikov had been awarded the title Hero of Russia - he died last month aged 94 - and was buried with full state honours.

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