2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,with the devolopment of the economy, this is no doubt that online of the shopping is in fashion now. It bought us a lot of benefit, at the same time,it have some problem. First, we could buy everything by online of the shopping and we could stay home every day.but it makes us a lake of excise, thus we have a bad health.Scond,we buy goods by online of the shopping which did not suit for us,we could take a lot of money by accident. As far as im concerned,when we want to buy goods,not only should we choose onlie of the shopping,but also we should choose go to shopping.In order to our health,we should take excise.