作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
DearMr. Lee, I was very glad to get your letter. Thank you for your invitation. I'd like to go to your beautiful school, but I just couldn't. My son will be nine years old onthe day you told me. He told me that he really expected me to his birthday paty. I promised. As a father, I know I am not good enough as others. I always be busy with one after another trouble. And I have a little time to stay with my family. I know I should give much more time and love to my son than ever before. Do you think so? I should be a good father.That is the reason I can not come to for. Can you understand me, my friend? I am sorry about it... Yours,John