2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of society,more and more parents do everything for their kids in spite whether the kids have grown up or not.Is this right? No ,it is terrible !in my opinion ,parents should let children do what they can do and study what they could personly and freely .Which can let they be independent.A teenager who cannot grow up and independ is very awful .parents cannot protect them for their all life.At the same time ,child also should not always relying on parents . In a word ,parents should pull the kids out and let they stand up by themself .