高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My home is located in southwest China, surrounded by mountains, there are two river, the Yangtze River and Jialing River, which is the largest city in China with a totalpopulation of over thirty million. We are not only rich in natural resources in Chongqing, there are many world famous attractions, such as the Dazu Rock Carvings, the Three Gorges. Parks, squares and Riverside Road is a good place for leisure citizens. Chongqing hot potis famous. We are Chongqing, transport facilities, to Chongqing, the best tourist season in the spring, neither cold nor hot. In recent years we Chongqing, Chongqing has changed dramatically, warm, friendly, hardworking, intelligent Chongqing determined to build their home more beautiful.