托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Some people claim that they prefer to study in universities having famous professors since the education receiving from famous professors is invaluable. But as for me, universities where graduates can find good jobs are my first choice. To begin with, the reason why students choose to study in the university with famous professors is based on the theory that they dream to be the famous professors or the elite. However, only a little proportion people are able to fulfill their dream. As we all know, even though there are increasing number of people commit themselves to football for the high salary or their interests, the number of athletes become to notable football stars like David Beckham, Lionel Messi and C. Messi is very few. Similarly, it's a tough challenge for many students striving for being famous professors. According to a recent study conducted by UN, the number of professors is about 0.3% around the world, let alone the proportion of famous professors. Therefore, it's the unrealistic expectation that makes most people choose to study in university where there are famous professors. Further, finding a good job means that you can earn much money. Although money-dominated choice has been critiquing by more and more people, the importance of money cannot be overstated. For instance, an adult, who is preparing to marry with his girlfriend, has to buy an appropriate house or a car, then earning money to satisfy the basic need of life. Especially in China, owning a house or not has been a significant criteria of mother-in-law to decide whether you can marry with her girl. In this sense, a good job determines that whether you and your loved one step into the wedding palace. Sometimes, one’s family member is ill and need much money to do a surgery to save her or his life. In this circumstance, money means to be or not to be. For this, how can you assume that finding a good job is nothing?