文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
My favorite sport I am an outgoing girl.I like sports very much,I always play sports with my friends.I like playing tennis,playing basketball and more.But my favorite sports is football. I fall in love love with playing football by chance.I found a football on my way home,and I picked it up.When my friends knew I have a football they asked me to play with them.So I played football with friends the whole afternoon.I fall in love with football deeply.I usually train football with them. My favorite football star is David Beckham who is from UK.To be honest,I hope that I can be a professional football player and play football with the football stars who play football best.