题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,computer is playing a more and more important role in today's life that we use it to study,work and do many other things.So some computer companies make computer softwares more and more improve and perfect to raise their benifits.Neverthelss,the matter is not that the computer will beging to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer. Computers is getting more and more intellect,to begin with,we can carry out every designing,making forms by programs in computer to improve offical business efficient.Then,we can communicate with others on computers conviently,the appearance of QQ,MSN and other chatting tools make it easer for us to talk with someone however long distance bewteen us.Furthermore,every video frequency,reading and game software can add some amusements to our leisure time,like watching movies,reading books or playing computer games that will make us relaxed after a long time after studing and working.Last but not least,when we go to somewhere unfimiliar for travelling,maps on baidu,stratigies of travelling make our trip more convenient and efficient. At the same time,man think by themselves less and less,more and more depend on the computer,when we meet difficulties,we will first think of finding answers in baidu,that's not the things should happen.Our life should be more convience but we should be more thinkful,refuse to be robot without minds.