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In recent times,the economic and industrial had got a big development, cities are become bigger and there are more and more new cities appearing.Also urbanization has brought to our country some development, there are still brought many problems to us,for example,the environment was destroyed,the warming climate, and the problem about the house.Except these typical problems,there're some small and unknown problems waiting for us.Among these problems,the problem about the creasing unemployment is the most important problem which I am concerned about. In the process of urbanization, there are more and more farmers come into the city and do kinds of works in our daily life.This kind of phenomenon lead to the less people do the farm works and some lands even have no people to plant and finally become wasted.Now,lots of farmers live in very small pieces land to have a survive.We are the biggest country in the oldest days but now we can not use the agriculture to earn money.It is a big waste to our country.300.million farmers would not be needed in agriculture. If this number is correct, then China's rural under or unemployed would exceed the-total population of the United States of America. Also, we still need farmers to support our life.There are lots of factories use the unknowledgeable farmers to work for them as long as possible. But the chances of the farmers to work in the city are very little.The improvement of the agriculture have surpass the process of the factories in the mordern society.There are still have a lot of graduates and the lay-off people come to city to find jobs.They have the totally ability to beat the farmers and the people which have the law education background.And we still believe that farmers will come back to the countryside to work with the lands. All in all, it can be easily seen that urbanization has given a big challenge to our economic and social development while also bring some troubles.Though there is no easy or quick solution to such a phenomenon, our government and experts are trying hard to find ways to fight against it.
