高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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Civilization is more and more important in international events.So it's necessary to improve the national qualities.Why should we improve the national qualities? Because it incarnate the contury's culture.And if the contury want to be stonger it should inprove its incarnate quality.But there many bad behaves around our life.For example some people like throwing trash on the ground.And some people often pick the flowers without allowed.I think they are very rude and impolite.So if we found someone do the things we should stop him doing. As a ancient civilization we should the national qualities.