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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Nowadays,our life quality is better than before and our society are developing.The issue about spending money carefully vary from person to person .Even though ,we as students should care more about spending our money in our daily life . Ample examples are illustrate my view of points .Firstly , we students are not afford to live with our own .In fact ,many of us spend money which is from our parents .Then we could not earn ourselves wholly for living .This money is not our private procession . For that reason, we should make our ways to save money .Because the parents work hard to make us living .secondly , we should cultivate the good habit of saving money .What's more ,we could use this money to help the people who is in need.More over ,there are lost of poverty region in the world ,we not only have our sympathy with them but also spare no efforts to give them a hand.Spend money for our own is not the glorious thing , but save the money for assist them in their life is great . Above what i said .we suppose to be careful our money in our daily life which is our responsibility. If we save some money ,it' good for ourselves or others ,and the world will be more beautiful.
