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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(23):态度决定一切

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要求：: Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
[写作内容]
1．概括该故事的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右；
2．就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。
1）你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异;
2）你从这个故事得到什么启示;
3）你对 “态度决定一切”如何理解?
4）举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。
[写作要求]
你可以使用实例可其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

用户的作文（系统评分82.0分）

评语：

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文：

Long time ago,there were three brothers working at the same company.However,because of different attitude towards job,three brothers got different salary. According to this story,I learned that different attitude contributed to different wages of the three brothers.So,I drew a conclusion from this:attitude is to us what water is to fish. From my own perspective,attitude can decide different life.In our life,must attend school for further study,work hard for better life and support whole family for love and responsibility,If we wish to accomplish all these things,attitude is essential. In the school I am studying,I have two best friends.One is smart while the other is common.Although the smart one have a good command of study,he is extremely proud and lazy,which lead his grades worse and worse.On the contrary,the common one works hard at study day and night.SO,her effort got rewards.She always gets good grades.From this example,obviously,different ending due to different study attitude.

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