2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man With the rapid development of technology,people enjoy a more convenient life.Computer is an obvious example.That is to say,computers are linked with people closely. On the one hand,computer has a great effect on people.For example,it makes a difference to people's communication,such as QQ,weibo and so on.Some people may discuss business，which adds to the chance of success.Some can chat with their relatives and friends to build up their relationships. Some students could communicate with their teachers for study aid.It is so convenient to people that people can't leave them in any day. On the other hand,human beings contribute a lot to computer.Many scientists work day and night to develop the technology of computer for great service for people's life. In a word,computer and man both change each other a lot.As is believed,computer will develop better and our life will be more vivid,too!