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Looking after olds had been a prominent social problem.We are so busy in working that we have less time to be with my parents.Given for that,our company produced a kind of robot that can be used convenient at home. This robot can cook on time,which can adjust by your need.Besides, chating with olds is the most attractive function,it also can play chess with them and do sports toghther.Most importantly,when some thing occurs,such as olds being ill,the robot can call emergency. If you are interested in this product,you can buy one for your parents
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