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十一期间(National Holiday)，你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待，并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学，主要包括如下内容：
1．感谢同学的热情邀请；
2．对他及家人的热情款待表示感激；
3．表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象；
4．再次感谢他们一家人，并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式，而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出，内容并不复杂，可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。
Dear Xiao Lu, Thank you for inviting me to your hometown during The National Hollday. You were so warm-heart that I could not forget you and your famalilies forever. I can well remember that when I get your hometown, how you welcomed me and how deep happy I felt. Your hometown is so beautiful. and I cannot forget it. Every night in my dream, I saw your beautiful hometown and you with your families. You are nice extremly! Thank you very much! And I invite you to my home, so we can play together. I promise you will enjiy yourself. Come on! See you the next day. Yours, Li Hua.
