正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写。
Boys and girls,as we know ,english is very important .but many students think its very difficult.in our dirly life ,english is very useful.if you want to have a trip in America or other westen curenties,you must use english to speak to others.What's more, english is also nesessary in many works. English is very important.but what should we do to have a good english.first,we should keep carefully in our class.second,english practice is important for our study,we must have enough practice after class.last but not least.we can take part in some activies,like english corners. Wish everyone all have a good english.thank you.