高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Playing football is my favourite sport.I like it by a chance. One day,when i went home in the way where i picked up a football,and played with my friends.From now on,i like play football deeply. I often play football with my friends,and usually train and compete with them.We both feel happy. My favourite sport star is David Beckham,whom is from England.My biggest dream is become a professional football player.I hope my dream will come true.