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How to Become a Smart Consumer Nowadays, most students are careful with money, which is spending economically and strategically. As far as I am concerned, it can't make students become a smart consumer. First of all, a smart consumer doesn't mean spending money economically all the time. A smart consumer knows what is a necessary object that must buy now, what is an unnecessary object that should buy later. What's more, a smart consumer make a good use of time and they know time is the most expensive object than others. Therefore, they wouldn't spend a lot of time that looking for all kinds of coupons in order for lower prices. For example, a smart consumer looking for restaurants , he would looking for the two restaurants that he wanted to eat and decided to go which one is cheaper. However, another guy was just looking for which one is cheapest then decided to go. It will becoming strange when people always looking for the cheapest one. In conclusion, students not only care about money and spend carefully, but they should make a full of time. Only in this way can they become a smart cosumer.
