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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33539
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

How to Become a Smart Consumer Nowadays, most students are careful with money, which is spending economically and strategically. As far as I am concerned, it can't make students become a smart consumer. First of all, a smart consumer doesn't mean spending money economically all the time. A smart consumer knows what is a necessary object that must buy now, what is an unnecessary object that should buy later. What's more, a smart consumer makes a good use of time and they know the time is the most expensive object than others. Therefore, they wouldn't spend a lot of time that looking for all kinds of coupons in order for lower prices. For example, a smart consumer looking for restaurants, he would looking for the two restaurants that he wanted to eat and decided to go which one is cheaper. However, another guy was just looking for which one is cheapest then decided to go. It will become strange when people always looking for the cheapest one. In conclusion, students not only care about money and spend carefully, but they should make the full of time. Only in this way can they become a smart consumer.

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