高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

My hometomn which used to be the most beautiful place of the world need the help. There were many green trees around here.As well as there was a clean river which much active fish lived in.Housese were not very beautiful here and people's life were not very rich. But now there are many tall buildings and too many cars run in the street.Enviroment is getting worse and worse with the development of the city.Trees are reducing,as well as fish are decreasing.So the most important thing is save the enviroment. In the end,I hope my hometown will get better.