2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the rapid development of the society,the numbers of the computer's utility are become more and more.The relationship between computer and man become closer and closer. It's a difficult thing for human beings to avoid touching computer in their spare time or at working.First of all,it has a high speed when we urge to search some dates.Thus,we are able to save a multitude of time to do other things.In addition,communication in the network is very available.It's convenient for us to deal with our transaction.We needn't to go to his country or his city to talk with him by face to face,and it's cheaper and cheaper by e-mail to negociate the details.After all,it's a little dear for people to communicate by distance phone. In a word,in the modern life,the computer in human's life plays more and more important role,which can also develop the computer.