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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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With the rapid development of the society,the numbers of the computer's utility are become more and more.The relationship between computer and man become closer and closer. It's a difficult thing for human beings to avoid touching computer in their spare time or in the working time.First of all,it has a high speed when we urge to search some dates.Thus,we are able to save a multitude of time to do other things.In addition,communication in the network is very available.It's convenient for us to deal with our transaction.We don't need to go to his country or his city to talk with him by face to face,and it's cheaper and cheaper by e-mail to negotiate the details.After all,it's a little dear for people to communicate by distance phone. In a word,in the modern life,the computer in human's life plays a more and more important role,which can also develop the computer.

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