高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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my favorite sport I am a middle school student,playing football is our favorite hobby. I love the soccer by chance.One day,I picked up a football on my way home,then I paly the soccer ball with my friends.Since then,I am deeply in love with the football.Though I did not have many free time,I alwnys played football with my friends after school.For this reason,I took part in the school team.To join the school team,I had more chances to get more professional guidance and had more match.Though I feel tired every day,I am still very happy. My favorite professional football palyer is David Beckham,he is really a good football player,and my friends are also love him.I awanys watched his match with lmy friends on the holiday. My most desire is becoming a professional football player like David Beckhan,I believe in I will realize my desire.