2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week.Each of them paid her 60 yuan a month.It is a common phenomenon that many college students hired cleaners for cleaning, because they are very lazy.I think it is not acceptable to hire others to sweep. On the one hand,as a college,we must have abilities of doing everything depend on ourselves,independence.We are not only learning skill through books but also improving abilities through practice.A good student will adept at manual dexterity.On the other hand,we should keep our traditional virtue,collecting money,industrious and brave. As far as I am concerned,we should actively clean in the full time not hired other people.As the old seeing goes,do it yourself and you will get food and clothing you need.