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Saving Money Makes Us Mature Some people hold such an opinion that saving money may not make us smart consumers.But is that the fact?We save money by group-buy deals,coupons and saled clothes.In my opinion,all these methods to help us save money make us smater and more mature. For economic prosperity,we'd better use money in an appropriate way.Saving is the easiest and the most effective way to support the idea.From some perspective,"saving is earning".Here is an example,if we earn one thousand dollars per month,the amount of the money which we save is one hundred dollars,and the fact is that we only spend nine hundred dollars per month.From other perspective,we have one hundred dollar left.So the more we save the more we can spend in the future.On the other hand,saving develop our mind of economy. Here comes the conclusion,saving can make us mature and smart.Saving money also make us smart consumers.
