题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
With the rapid development of computer technology,its utilisation has become more common nowadays.The relationship between computer and man had become more and more closer than before. Besides,its difficult to avoid human usage of computer technology,whether its during working or between leisure moments.The invention of internet has enable instant searching technology for vast amount of information.Thus,we're able to obtain information in a short span of time.With this,we're able to save multitude of time and utilize it for other more important task. In a word,it's unbelievable for human to far from the computer technology.