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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
My shcool was built in 1990 with 48 classrooms.There are 280 teachers and 3200 students.My school is very large so that can held more than 60 classes. Besides,I can enjoy reading for there are 20 thousands books in library.TO my delightful,science-room is a interesting place where have lots of physical and chemical labs as well as four music-rooms. Now I am studying in senior 1 Grade 4.And I need many curiculums such as Chinese,Math,English,physic ,chemic and computer.As a matter of fact,I am good at English and computer,so I have great accdemic proformance.I like to listen pop music becaous I find it relax myself.In additon,l am keen on swimming and skitting,noting is more healthy than do outdoor sports.
