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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
My school was built in 1990 with 48 classrooms.There are 280 teachers and 3200 students.My school is very large so that it can held more than 60 classes. Besides,I can enjoy reading for there are 20 thousand books at library.Science-room is an interesting place where have lots of physical and chemical labs as well as four music-rooms. Now I am studying in senior 1 Grade 4.And I need many curriculums such as Chinese,Math,English,physic,chemic and computer.As a matter of fact,I am good at English and computer,so I have great academic performance.I like to listen to pop music because I find it can enjoy myself.In addition,l am keen on swimming and skirting,noting is more healthy than do outdoor sports.
