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HOW TO BECOME A SMART CONSUMER As a student,most of us are careful about our money.Someone save money by using coupons or buying clothes which in a sale and they think this is the good way to be a smart consumer.But someone think it is unnecessary.In my opinion,i think this way is useful in a way,but obviously it can't make you become a smart consumer.So i don't agree with it. The reason are follows:At first,you can't buy the goods that have good quality.Maybe you can buy the goods and save your money in a way,but you can't promise its quality and the happiness you get in the shopping may drop a lot. Then,if you just want to buy the cheap,it may means that you can't buy the necessary goods in time.Because some goods will in a sale only out of style or in the wrong time.Therefore,it's important to buy a thing which you like in time rather than waiting it out of style. All in all,it unnecessary to forced yourself to buy the cheap and it can't help you to be a smart consumer.Therefore,please enjoy the shopping feeling and buy the things you like in time.Buying what you really need,it is the only key to be a smart consumer.
