2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

First,we can learn a lot from it and get information quickiy.Second,if we use it properly it is useful for us to study.Third we can make friends by computer.so computer is important in our daily life. But it also has disadvantages,the disadvantages are: if we spend too much time on computer to play games or chat,I think it is waste our time and money,and also it is bad for our study.maybe we can easily cheat. In short,we must use computer properly so that can save us better.