高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段。

My hometown, a village locating beside a small river, is a wonderful place with beautiful scenery surrounded. Because of the poor geographical environment and without an asphalt road, the whole village is poor and people’s lives are tough. Generally, people grow rice and some other crops for a living. Most young people work at the city, leaving their parents and children at home, which is the status of the vast majority of rural area. It seems that only in this way can rural people live a better life.