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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The Internet In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an important role in our society. With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet. However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively,and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.

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