2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Nowadays with the devoloment of the socity, the internet is playing a more and more important role in our life.But it bought some problem. There are have different points for the internet. Some people hoid a view that the internet can improve their study efficiency, at the same time, their woke will bacome the batter by the internet. But some people believe that teenagers are crazy ahout the internet,account for teenagers' study become more bad before it. As far as im concerned, everything have two side and the internet is no exception.There are no doubt that the internet is benefit of pople communciate with ohers, thus strouge their friendship. Of couse, the interner have some yellow news, we should be turn off the yellow news at time. Thus we should use the internet by a right way.I believe that a bridge furture is waiting for us.