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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
Nowadays with the development of the society, the internet is playing a more and more important role in our life.But it bought some problem. There are different points for the internet. Some people hold a view that the internet can improve study efficiency, at the same time, their work will bacome the batter by the internet. But some people believe that teenagers are crazy ahout the internet,account for teenagers' study become more bad before it. As far as im concerned, everything have two side and the internet is no exception.There is no doubt that the internet is benefit of pople communciate with others, thus strouge their friendship. Of couse, the interner have some bad news, we should be turn off the bad news. Thus we should use the internet by a right way.I believe that a bridge future is waiting for us.
