2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays with the development of the society, the internet is playing a more and more important role in our life.But it bought some problem. There are different points for the internet. Some people hold a view that the internet can improve study efficiency, at the same time, their work will bacome the batter by the internet. But some people believe that teenagers are crazy ahout the internet,account for teenagers' study become more bad before it. As far as I'm concerned, everything has two sides and the internet is no exception.There is no doubt that the internet is benefit of people communciate with others, thus storage their friendship. Of couse, the interner have some bad news, and we should be turn off the bad news. Thus we should use the internet by a right way.I believe that a bright future is waiting for us.