高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown My home is in Chongqing, spread out the map to find the most middle of the city - Chongqing, a surge of deep feelings of love Township arises spontaneously from my heart. I grew up in Chongqing, drinking water in Jialing River, Chongqing hot pot eating, Mala Tang, cold noodles, hot and sour powder ... ... in my eyes is the best in Chongqing city, Chongqing, and I have deep feelings. Chongqing central city as the Yangtze River, Jialing River surrounded by a beautiful, unique style. Chongqing has a long history of thousand years, Chongqing has left a lot of famous scenic spots, ancient historical sites and natural wonders Xiongjun. This is my favorite hometown Chongqing.