高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

My hometown I used to live in my hometown,there was so beautiful,and I love there so much. Formerly,my hometown had many green trees,and had a lot of birds.There was a river,and there were lots of fish in the rever.The water was clear and the fish was playing in the river every day.Though houses were simple and crude,streets were narrow,people`s life were hard,our feel happy. Now,there are many tall buuildings,cars.But there are not green trees and clear water any more.We suffered great damage to the environment,withal,we feel worried.We must sove these probloms.