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With the quick growth of economic people's life get more and more wealth.So many people have bought own car .This kind of phenomena brings pollution.I think private car owners should pay tax. First ,whatever types of cars ,they should use oil so they may produce dirty air . this will bring air pollution.Second,more and more cars will bring traffic jam.People in the car throw trash to the ground ,this will bring other pollution .Last private cars get more and more,they will bring pollution exactlly.Alhough,many owners do not want to pay the tax for pollution ,but I think as you bought the private car you should take responsible for it.So just pay it! All in all ,if you are not ready to pay the tax for your cars please do not buy it in soon time.
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