托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第40篇:你认为那些有名的运动员或消遣者理应挣高薪吗

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In today`s society, some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. In this regard, people have many arguments, my opinion is as follows: First, I think some famous athletes and entertainers have a high salary is very normal. They have also gained fame in obtaining high salaries at the same time. Of course, is to their efforts as the basis. We just saw their salaries and fame, but do not pay attention to them how much effort to. Every day repeat a exercise dozens or even hundreds of thousands of times. This exercise is boring, only experienced people can know. A work, a harvest, so I think some famous athletes and entertainers deserve high salary and fame. Second,