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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。
Recently,the phenomenon that joining volunteer groups and become a volunteer has become a hot topic.More and more students chose to become a volunteer.I think it is beneficial for person and the government.Only in this way can people make themselves great men and contribute a lot to the society. Some practice has some advantages.On the one hand,registered volunteers is not only improve our ability of service society but also extremely helps people who really needs to help.We can attain our goals and finish self-value.On the other hand,the government may benefit from this matter.It enables more people to join this groups and help more people to go through hard times.It is useful for contribute a harmious society. In a word,it is advisable for everyone to help other people.As the old saying goes,all for one,one for all.As far as I am concerned,as a college student,we should firstly participate in groups of volunteers and actively to do good things.
