高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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With the time went by,many country got more and more rich,and more and more people had their own cars.but ,people have two different opinons for this.Some people think,cars let our life more convenient and more confortable.Another hand,it let we know our country have get rich than before. Someone do not think so.Too many cars made transportation difficultly,so that more confidents came on because of that.People have lived in trouble.And then ,parking get not equal at the same time.