文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;请注意分段。
dear Georqe: good day it was nice to receiving from you ,your letter recently mentioned that you want to know more about those household hotels in my hometown , the details are as follow : price : CNY30 each for single room CNY20 each for double room table money: CNY20 each day you can each lunch with the host family or order dishes in the menu.you can also make dishes by your self . you may take part in the activities like sea-water bathing/ mountaineering /unpaid greenhouse laboring if you like . that's all i know about the household hotels in my hometown and i wish you would have a nice summer vocation in my hometown best regards yours Lihua