高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Dear editor， I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. With the development of people's living conditions，more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it good to own a car. Firstly，it's a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation tool. You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger. It also makes businesses and industries develop faster. Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents. Besides，parking cars is another big problem. Maybe people should think carefully before they buy a car. Thank you. Yours truly， Li Hua