the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是…
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。
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Everybody is good, here a notice Please the first grade students to take an autumn please be on time. On the morning of December 27th 7:00 in school set According to the plan, the travel route is the morning visit the botanical garden and see "man and nature" of the exhibition, to the Summer Palace in the afternoon Pay attention to your lunch, please before this Thursday to student enrolment.