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Notice It is scheduled for June 20, 2010 to visit the Qinglong County Forestry farm. Route 8:30 am the farm office, general manager of the farm. 9:30 in the morning to visit the farm Morning visit 10:30 field office plant 11:30 in the morning to the farm at Those who wish to please the starting 6:30 in the morning in the library collection. The car will start at 6:40