高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；请注意分段。

There are many kinds of interesting sports, such as basketball, football, swimming and running, but the most I like is swimming. When I was a little child, my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming. Then, I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water, especially in summer, It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes. I like swimming. It's so wonderful.